Free fluidity
Through which falls
All Manna of life;
Sounds and squalls
Sharp and circling
Ferocious and wanting
Delicate handling,
Gentle smoothing,
Quiet attempting
At elusive understanding.
I got brave enough!
This is inspired by this weeks prompt Chaos over at One Single Impression
SisterJuliaArts 
January 17, 2010 at 11:16 pm
Yeah, that flows realy nicely!
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January 18, 2010 at 2:52 am
“Elusive Understanding” – I loved the way you interpreted the prompt this week.. Wonderful way of portraying the efforts, that gives an impression of a distinct chaotic layer..
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January 18, 2010 at 3:57 pm
So lovely! Your words spoke to me.
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January 18, 2010 at 4:18 pm
Thank you Andy, Dark Lord and Sweetest in the Gale!
I'm grabbing the bits of quiet time I have in the midst of the chaos to explore the other poems..it's been a really lovely way to discover writing.
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January 18, 2010 at 6:09 pm
a very nice juxtaposition of descriptors — ferocious and delicate both — very evocative, chaotic.
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January 18, 2010 at 7:51 pm
Nicely penned!
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January 18, 2010 at 9:22 pm
Thank you Sue …your comment is quite beautiful to read in itself
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January 18, 2010 at 9:38 pm
Difficult to think straight at times, and you captured it well.
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January 18, 2010 at 10:36 pm
My home is perfect inspiration!
I've been wandering around your blog of wonderful treasures…I've never come across writing quite like yours before.
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January 19, 2010 at 4:19 am
Amidst the chaos, was born a brave you!
Wonderful take my friend!
Keep up!
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January 19, 2010 at 10:28 pm
Thank you Tumblewords,
And I shall try to Amity!
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January 20, 2010 at 2:23 am
Thanks! That is a wonderful poem.
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January 22, 2010 at 8:47 pm
You shattered chaos’ spell with persistence and finesse. Hurray! Is chaos a toddler?
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January 23, 2010 at 12:17 am
Chaos is my home!
Including teenager, toddler, husband and the many associated friends!
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