Confidence
Lust
Enchantedness
Curiosity
Bliss
Pride and ecstasy
Enthusiasm
Exuberance
And Excitability
Waxen Wings
Something in the steady beat of love
Lifts me differently
Confidence
Lust
Enchantedness
Curiosity
Bliss
Pride and ecstasy
Enthusiasm
Exuberance
And Excitability
Waxen Wings
Something in the steady beat of love
Lifts me differently
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June 7, 2010 at 12:26 am
Lovely list leading to a strong (and beautifully positive) ending. Interesting take on the prompt.
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June 7, 2010 at 1:58 am
A gentle song. Nicely done.
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June 7, 2010 at 10:23 am
Waxen Wings… so what?
Liked this poem.
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June 7, 2010 at 12:59 pm
An uplifting poem…I really enjoyed this.
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June 7, 2010 at 1:03 pm
can confidence be a waxen wing.. well, liked your take on the prompt.. very uniquely interpreted..
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June 7, 2010 at 4:49 pm
I liked how you did it. Much to think..
help me rewrite Greek tragedies
Also, please do hop on the Monday Poetry Train
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June 8, 2010 at 1:24 am
That's quite a list of descriptors there. I think you captured the full gamet. Though the thought of love being something totally different is powerful. Nicely done.
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June 8, 2010 at 1:33 am
Oh, yes, indeed. Well done.
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June 8, 2010 at 2:35 pm
I love the last line! we've all had our wax wing moments, haven't we? thanks!
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June 8, 2010 at 5:09 pm
Thank you everyone!
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June 9, 2010 at 3:46 pm
Nicely done, like it very much!
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