Coming
It cleans
Lifts up my shirt
Caresses my neck
and licks at my hair
In its fresh coolness
The scent of green wildness
Calls crisply
Of broken grass and Melissa leaves
Under bare feet.
This weeks respone to the OSI prompt ‘Overt, the wind that blows through the open windows’
July 11, 2010 at 12:44 pm
Delicious! Thank you.
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July 11, 2010 at 4:49 pm
wonderful imagery … you captured the overt sensuality of nature in this poem.
thanks for your contribution to the prompt!
peace,
JP/deb
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July 12, 2010 at 4:14 am
Wonderful interpretation of this prompt!
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July 12, 2010 at 4:14 pm
Great flow!
hugging the stones, I meditate fervently
Also do get aboard the Monday Poetry Train
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July 12, 2010 at 4:58 pm
A nice cute take on the prompt..ah, the scent of green wilderness..
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July 13, 2010 at 2:45 am
Stunning!
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July 15, 2010 at 8:48 pm
Thank you everyone 😀
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